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I went to explore AAA and NNN yesterday for the second time. It's exquisite scenery and pleasant weather enchanted me as it did on my first visit, although I enjoyed my visit this time more. I made my tour eternal by taking breathtaking snaps using my awesome photographic skills. Please see the snaps and justify.
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" Whether or not this is correct depends on what AAA and NNN are. " The last two sentences might be better as: "I made my tour memorable by taking breathtaking pics, using my photographic skill. Check out the pics.
- " Whether or not this is correct depends on what AAA and NNN are.
- " The last two sentences might be better as: "I made my tour memorable by taking breathtaking pics, using my photographic skill.
- Check out the pics.
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In the second sentence you have: "It's exquisite scenery..." Whether or not this is correct depends on what AAA and NNN are. If these are two places, it should be: "Their exquisite scenery...as they did on my first visit..."
The last two sentences might be better as: "I made my tour memorable by taking breathtaking pics, using my photographic skill. Check out the pics. Awesom
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