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break up 2
It was still raining when John and Jane got off the same stop. She asked him to share her umbrella with him but he refused. He told him he could use the plastic bag to cover his head so it would be fine. When they got into a train station, a conversation really started going on. Jane began to hint that she wanted to see the movie coming up and said it was the movie she had been waiting for a long time. John asked her what the movie was about. He thought the story was pretty interesting though he never knew any actor in it.
John invited her out to the movie. At the time, John had no car because he could barely live on flipping burger at McDonald. He was in a theater first waiting for Jane. She came on time. Somehow John bought the tickets for both of them and didn't ask Jane for the money. It was strange because he never paid someone's ticket. Then his mind began to develop the feeling toward Jane
Is the above passage correct?
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John invited her out to the movie. At the time, John had no car because he could barely live on flipping burger at McDonald. He was in a theater first waiting for Jane. She came on time. Somehow John bought the tickets for both of them and didn't ask Jane for the money. It was strange because he never paid someone's ticket. Then his mind began to develop the feeling toward Jane
Is the above passage correct?
Thank you
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It was still raining when John and Jane got off the same stop. She asked him to share her umbrella but he refused. He told her it would be fine to cover his head with the plastic bag.
- It was still raining when John and Jane got off the same stop.
- She asked him to share her umbrella but he refused.
- He told her it would be fine to cover his head with the plastic bag.
- When they arrived in a train station, they began to talk.
- Jane hinted that she wanted to watch the upcoming movie that she had been longing to see for a long time.
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It was still raining when John and Jane got off the same stop. She asked him to share her umbrella but he refused. He told her it would be fine to cover his head with the plastic bag.
When they arrived in a train station, they began to talk. Jane hinted that she wanted to watch the upcoming movie that she had been longing to see for a long time. John asked her what the movie was about. H
When they arrived in a train station, they began to talk. Jane hinted that she wanted to watch the upcoming movie that she had been longing to see for a long time. John asked her what the movie was about. H
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