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Offroad Posted 16 years ago
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Break-up

DEar teachers, could you check this passage for errors?

- What would you do if you saw a love message from somebody else in your lover's cell phone?
- I would still give a chance for her to explain, however the odds of me accepting it would be almost none, therefore, along another break-up would come.

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offroad - What would you do if you saw a love message from somebody else in your lover's cell phone? - fine offroad - I would still give a chance for her to explain, however the odds of me accepting it would be almost non existent, therefore another break-up would follow.

— Dave Phillips

  • offroad - What would you do if you saw a love message from somebody else in your lover's cell phone?
  • - fine offroad - I would still give a chance for her to explain, however the odds of me accepting it would be almost non existent, therefore another break-up would follow.
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offroad- What would you do if you saw a love message from somebody else in your lover's cell phone?

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offroad- I would still give a chance for her to explain, however the odds of me accepting it would be almost non existent, therefore another break-up would follow.
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I would suggest ... the odds of my accepting would be almost non-existent. Therefore, another...
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Yes GG, you are correct. I was editing off the orginal text and missed those. - Thanks
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