Break up 1

It has been ten long up and down romantically years that John and Jane have been together. First it started they were just friends. Then Jane had a big crush on John; however, he didn't notice it because he was too occupied with his school and flipping hamburgers at McDonald. Until one day, the weather was grim and threatening. Then it started pouring from the sky. Jane was waiting at the bus station while John was walking across to the place and used a plastic bag to cover his head. As soon as he took off his bag, he saw Jane looking on. He greeted Jane warmly and asked him some casual questions. In minutes, then the bus came. They were abroad it and sat in the noisy back. Jane asked him why you were staying in school so late. He told him he had to study his history exam and explained to him he could not study at home because his sister always turned on TV.



What coincidence it was! They both got off the same stop.

Is the above sentence correct?

Thank you