Can you correct this body of my email? Thank you.
I would like to break the lesson into two one-and-a-half-hour lessons on Friday and Saturday from 3 to, same payment. It can help him better concentrate. But it's totally up to you all.
This looks okay. " The phrase "you all" is a Southern US expression. "
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This looks okay. The only thing that may be a little questionable is the last two words "you all." The phrase "you all" is a Southern US expression. It might be better as: "...totally up to you."
I would like to break the lesson into two one-and-a-half-hour lessons on Friday and Saturday, starting at 3. The payment will be the same.