0
Nousher Ahmed Posted 12 years ago
Grammar
break a sentence to make it simple
This sentences have taken from CAMBRIDGE
IELTS
4.
"The 550,000 consultations with alternative
therapists reported in the 1990 survey
represented about an eight of the total number of
consultations with medically qualified personnel
covered by the survey, according to Dr Laver
and colleagues writing in the Australian Journal
of Public Health in 1993. "
I think, the core of this given sentence is "The
5,50,000 consultations.............reported in 1990
survey........"
Can I break this given sentence into two or more
parts as like as following sentences?
1. The 5,50,000 consultations ....... reported in
the 1990 survey .....
2. 1990 survey is represented about an eighth of
the total number of consultations with medically
qualified personnel.
3. Medically qualified personnel is covered by
the survey.
4. The survey has taken problem from Dr. Laver
and colleagues writing in the Australian journal of
public health in 1993.
Are this four sentences correct? If they are not
correct, Would you like to help me to realize this
given sentence by breaking it into more than one
parts?
IELTS
4.
"The 550,000 consultations with alternative
therapists reported in the 1990 survey
represented about an eight of the total number of
consultations with medically qualified personnel
covered by the survey, according to Dr Laver
and colleagues writing in the Australian Journal
of Public Health in 1993. "
I think, the core of this given sentence is "The
5,50,000 consultations.............reported in 1990
survey........"
Can I break this given sentence into two or more
parts as like as following sentences?
1. The 5,50,000 consultations ....... reported in
the 1990 survey .....
2. 1990 survey is represented about an eighth of
the total number of consultations with medically
qualified personnel.
3. Medically qualified personnel is covered by
the survey.
4. The survey has taken problem from Dr. Laver
and colleagues writing in the Australian journal of
public health in 1993.
Are this four sentences correct? If they are not
correct, Would you like to help me to realize this
given sentence by breaking it into more than one
parts?
Top answer
"The 550,000 consultations with alternative therapists reported in the 1990 survey represented about an eight of the total number of consultations with medically qualified personnel covered by the survey, according to Dr Laver and colleagues writing in the Australian Journal of Public Health in 1993. " Your sentences did not have the same information as in the original sentence. How many parts do you want?
- "The 550,000 consultations with alternative therapists reported in the 1990 survey represented about an eight of the total number of consultations with medically qualified personnel covered by the survey, according to Dr Laver and colleagues writing in the Australian Journal of Public Health in 1993.
- " Your sentences did not have the same information as in the original sentence.
- How many parts do you want?
- Here are four, but I would combine #3 and #4 into one sentence.
- 1) The 1990 survey reported 550,000 consultations with alternative therapists.
Get the Weekly English Kit 📬
New words, one handy idiom, and a 2-minute quiz — delivered to your inbox to keep your streak alive.
2 Answers
0
"The 550,000 consultations with alternative
therapists reported in the 1990 survey
represented about an eight of the total number of
consultations with medically qualified personnel
covered by the survey, according to Dr Laver
and colleagues writing in the Australian Journal
of Public Health in 1993. "
Your sentences did not have the same information as in the orig
therapists reported in the 1990 survey
represented about an eight of the total number of
consultations with medically qualified personnel
covered by the survey, according to Dr Laver
and colleagues writing in the Australian Journal
of Public Health in 1993. "
Your sentences did not have the same information as in the orig
00
Related Questions