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Anonymous Posted 18 years ago
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Booking a room
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00 Receptionist : Hello, good morning. King's Hotel .Can I help you? 02 br
00 Tourist : Hello, good morning. Yes, I would like to make a reservation for three days. So may I know the exact location 02 br
00 of King's Hotel ? 02 br
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00 Receptionist : Oh, King's Hotel is in Wales and it is in the town area.There are many shopping malls near the hotel. It is 02 br
00 only 15 minutes ride from the airport to the hotel if you take the taxi. It's very convienient. 02 br
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00 Tourist : It sounds good. Can I know what are the charges for the room? 02 br
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00 Receptionist : A single room is 60 pounds and a double room is 80 pounds. We charge 100 pounds for a family suite and 02 br
00 an extra bed costs 20 pounds.May I know how many persons are coming with you, madam? 02 br
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00 Tourist : There are four of us including my husband and my two kids. I plan to have a double room overlooking the 02 br
00 beach. 02 br
00 Receptionist : O.k. madam I'll arrange everything for you. 02 br
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00 Tourist : What other facilities are available in the hotel? 02 br
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00 Receptionist : All the rooms have central heating and air conditioning. We also have rooms overlooking the beach and 02 br
00 also facing the road. There is a large wsimmimg poolarea at the sixth floor. We have two restaurants 02 br
00 serving western and eastern cuisine. I hope all these information can help you, madam? 02 br
00 Tourist : Yes, marvellous! I think you may reserve a double room for me now. 02 br
00 Receptionist : O.K madam. Can I have your name, telephone number and address for the reservation, please ? 0-
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00 Receptionist : Hello, good morning. King's Hotel .Can I help you? 02 br
00 Tourist : Hello, good morning. Yes, I would like to make a reservation for three days. So may I know the exact location 02 br
00 of King's Hotel ? 02 br
02 br
00 Receptionist : Oh, King's Hotel is in Wales and it is in the town area.There are many shopping malls near the hotel. It is 02 br
00 only 15 minutes ride from the airport to the hotel if you take the taxi. It's very convienient. 02 br
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00 Tourist : It sounds good. Can I know what are the charges for the room? 02 br
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00 Receptionist : A single room is 60 pounds and a double room is 80 pounds. We charge 100 pounds for a family suite and 02 br
00 an extra bed costs 20 pounds.May I know how many persons are coming with you, madam? 02 br
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00 Tourist : There are four of us including my husband and my two kids. I plan to have a double room overlooking the 02 br
00 beach. 02 br
00 Receptionist : O.k. madam I'll arrange everything for you. 02 br
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00 Tourist : What other facilities are available in the hotel? 02 br
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00 Receptionist : All the rooms have central heating and air conditioning. We also have rooms overlooking the beach and 02 br
00 also facing the road. There is a large wsimmimg poolarea at the sixth floor. We have two restaurants 02 br
00 serving western and eastern cuisine. I hope all these information can help you, madam? 02 br
00 Tourist : Yes, marvellous! I think you may reserve a double room for me now. 02 br
00 Receptionist : O.K madam. Can I have your name, telephone number and address for the reservation, please ? 0-
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0 I think you will get more help if you reformat your dialog. 0-
- 0 I think you will get more help if you reformat your dialog.
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0 I think you will get more help if you reformat your dialog. I know I'm not willing to go through it as it is currently formatted. 02 br
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00 Tourist: blah 02 br
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0 R: Hello. Good Morning. King's Hotel. Can I help you 02 br
00 T: Hello, good morning. Yes, I would like to make a reservation for three days. Can you tell/give me the exact location of the hotel? 02 br
00 R Oh, we are in Wales. (This is too general to be ablt to say in the town) you need to add the name of a town eg. we are situated in the centre of Cardiff. There are shopp
00 T: Hello, good morning. Yes, I would like to make a reservation for three days. Can you tell/give me the exact location of the hotel? 02 br
00 R Oh, we are in Wales. (This is too general to be ablt to say in the town) you need to add the name of a town eg. we are situated in the centre of Cardiff. There are shopp
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0 With the understanding that I'm a speaker of U. S. not U. K. English. 02 br
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00 Just a few comments. 02 br
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00 Using both "hello" and "good morning" seems overdone, one or the other is better. In fact the receptionist is more likely to say simply "King's Hotel, may I help you." 02 br
00 give me the exact location (not tell me) 02 br
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00 Just a few comments. 02 br
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00 Using both "hello" and "good morning" seems overdone, one or the other is better. In fact the receptionist is more likely to say simply "King's Hotel, may I help you." 02 br
00 give me the exact location (not tell me) 02 br
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0 Thanks for your help. I did type the right way but it came out like this so it must be quite hard to read. sorry 0-
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