book review of The Jungle Book..please give your comment.

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The Jungle Book is the best story from Rudjard Kipling. The story is about the beginning life of Tarzan.When he was a child, he was known as Mowgli. He has been taken care by Father and Mother Wolf. He also has many friends like Bagheera, Babloo and The Black Panther. Mother Wolf wants Mowgli to stay in their Pack (their group which life together for same purpose), but it has been objected by Shere Khan. Shere Khan is a tiger which always hunts and tries to kill Mowgli. As a result, Mother Wolf has sweared which is if Mowgli has grown up, he will hunt and kill Shere Khan like Shere Khan has done to him. The other animals in the jungle were agreed to allow Mowgli to stay with them. After a few years, Mowgli grows up and he took the revenge towards Shere Khan. He killed Shere Khan by burning it in a fire because he knows that tigers are afraid with fire. After that, Mowgli has left the jungle and go to the outside world to become a man.

From my opinion, this book is quite interesting because it teaches us how to make a way of life with other creatures. We do not have to hate each other like Shere Khan do towards Mowgli. I would recommend this book to person who like to read the story about the nature. It is also suitable to be as story telling during bed time for children.

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Hello!! This is a great review. I have a few suggestions. Hopefully they will help.

In the second sentence, I would change it to "the beginning of Tarzan's life."

When mentioning their pack, you could change it to, a group in which they live together.

Talking about Shere Khan is a tiger which hunts, change it to Shere Khan is a tiger WHO hunts

The past tense of swear, is swore. It will sound better if you change has sweared to swore.

When saying, the other animals in the jungle were agreed, you don't need to have the were. Agreed is past tense by itself.

He killed Shere Khan by burning it.. change the it to him.

When saying afraid with fire, it sounds better to say, afraid of fire.

In the last sentence of the first paragraph, change the go to went. If the beginning of the sentence is past tense, make sure that they end of the sentence is past tense.

In the first sentence of the next paragraph, you can put a comma after interesting, because the "because" in the sentence is used to connect the two sentences together.

When saying, like Shere do towards Moghli, instead put "does."

When saying, recommend this book to person, make sure to put an article before the word person. An article is a, an , or the. I would say a person. When saying, a person who like, make sure to say likes

In the last sentence, it would flow better if you said, It is also suitable to be used for story telling ....

Hope this helps!

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