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Angliholic Posted 19 years ago
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Blubber helps keep freeing air and cold water off polar bears, and acts as

Blubber helps keep freeing air and cold water off polar bears, and acts as a nutritional reserve when food cannot be found.

Blubber helps keep freeing air and cold water away from polar bears, and serves/functions as a nutritious reserve when food cannot be found.

Which version of the above two is more sensible and why? Thanks.
  

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I'd go for a major overhaul-- and a Z in freezing : Blubber insulates polar bears from freezing air and cold water and acts/serves/functions as a nutritional reserve when food cannot be found.

  • I'd go for a major overhaul-- and a Z in freezing : Blubber insulates polar bears from freezing air and cold water and acts/serves/functions as a nutritional reserve when food cannot be found.
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I'd go for a major overhaul-- and a Z in freezing:

Blubber insulates polar bears from freezing air and cold water and acts/serves/functions as a nutritional reserve when food cannot be found.

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Mister MicawberI'd go for a major overhaul-- and a Z in freezing:

Blubber insulates polar bears from freezing air and cold water and acts/serves/functions as a nutritional reserve when food cannot be found.


Thanks, Mister.

I'm pretty enamoured of your revision, but I'd like to know fir
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The difference in keep off and keep from is simply the prepositions-- off implies 'not on' and from implies 'not toward'-- but neither seems natural or appropriate here; a more formal, scientific vocabulary is required.

As for nutritional vs nutritious: I suppose either is possible. I chose the one that seemed more the language of the nutritioni
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Mister MicawberThe difference in keep off and keep from is simply the prepositions-- off implies 'not on' and from implies 'not toward'-- but neither seems natural or appropriate here; a more formal, scientific vocabulary is required.

As for nutritional vs nutritious: I suppose either is possible. I chose the one that s
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Of course you cannot. Neither can you find maple walnut or chocolate-cherry or Chinese-Italian or a host of other compounds. You'll have to put the two foodstuffs together into the casserole with your own imagination.
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Thanks, Mister.

Got it.

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