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Moguwai007 Posted 12 years ago
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Could you please check if the following sentences sound natural for a post on Facebook.This message is for potential shop guests from overseas, who will also travel in Tokyo.
Mr Tom Jackson, our guest from Singapore, wrote a review of our shop on his blog. I would like to share his blog, because his detailed comments on his experiences in Tokyo can also help other travelers.
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Mr Tom Jackson, our guest from Singapore, wrote a review of our shop on his blog. I would like to share his blog, because his detailed comments on his experiences in Tokyo can also help other travelers.
http://********
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This is pretty much OK; just a couple of small comments ... Is it his blog that you want to share, or is it actually his review? ".
- This is pretty much OK; just a couple of small comments ...
- Is it his blog that you want to share, or is it actually his review?
- ".
- "...
- can also help other travelers" feels like a definite statement about something which you cannot really know for sure.
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This is pretty much OK; just a couple of small comments ...
Is it his blog that you want to share, or is it actually his review? To avoid the issue you could simply say "I would like to share this...".
"... can also help other travelers" feels like a definite statement about something which you cannot really know for sure. Consider saying something like "... may also be helpful t
Is it his blog that you want to share, or is it actually his review? To avoid the issue you could simply say "I would like to share this...".
"... can also help other travelers" feels like a definite statement about something which you cannot really know for sure. Consider saying something like "... may also be helpful t
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