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Jackson6612 Posted 15 years ago
Grammar
Bject being at zero on the Z-axis
I think the following sentence is vague in meaning:
The difference between an object being at zero on the Z-axis and the height that it is above zero.
What do you say? How would you improve it? Please help me. Thanks.
The difference between an object being at zero on the Z-axis and the height that it is above zero.
What do you say? How would you improve it? Please help me. Thanks.
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I would just delete 'being' and change 'the height that it is' to 'its height'.
- I would just delete 'being' and change 'the height that it is' to 'its height'.
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I would just delete 'being' and change 'the height that it is' to 'its height'.
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Hi Mr. Micawber
The difference between an object at zero on the Z-axis and its height above zero.
Don't you think the above sentence lacks clarity in meaning? My try is:
The difference between an object's
The difference between an object at zero on the Z-axis and its height above zero.
Don't you think the above sentence lacks clarity in meaning? My try is:
The difference between an object's
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Don't you think the above sentence lacks clarity in meaning?-- No, not at all.
My try is: The difference between an object's side at zero on the Z-axis and object's overall height above zero.-- The underlined portions are not really intelligible.
My try is: The difference between an object's side at zero on the Z-axis and object's overall height above zero.-- The underlined portions are not really intelligible.
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