Birthday wish
Wish you a happy birthday brother as the love handles don't go away similarly I pray that happiness and joy stays with you till the end and doesn't leave you either.
Please check whether is there any grammatical mistake or not this wish I made from my end on my best friends birthday. Please let me know.
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It is almost OK, but you have your usual problem of running one thought after another without any consideration of where sentences should begin and end. This is one possibility: (I) Wish you a happy birthday, brother. As the love handles don't go away, similarly I pray that happiness and joy stays with you till the end and doesn't leave you either.
- It is almost OK, but you have your usual problem of running one thought after another without any consideration of where sentences should begin and end.
- This is one possibility: (I) Wish you a happy birthday, brother.
- As the love handles don't go away, similarly I pray that happiness and joy stays with you till the end and doesn't leave you either.
- " is an informal abbreviation.
- You say it is addressed to your best friend, but, still, be sure that "brother" is appropriate.
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It is almost OK, but you have your usual problem of running one thought after another without any consideration of where sentences should begin and end. This is one possibility:
(I) Wish you a happy birthday, brother. As the love handles don't go away, similarly I pray that happiness and joy stays with you till the end and doesn't leave you either.
In full, it should be "I w
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