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Believer Posted 20 years ago
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Birthday post

0I have written a post for a birthday party. P/S correct it if you feel needed.02br
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01i00_________________________________________________________02i02br
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00 BIRTHDAY PARTY02br
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00Place: my house02br
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00Date: January 14, 200_02br
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00Hi, all my friends, I am celebrating my birthday at my home at the date shown and you are all invited.02br
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00The birthday party will be celebrated in the following order:02br
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001. Cake-cutting ceremony02br
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00 (No need for "a" I think.)02br
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002. Singing birthday song02br
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00 (Can I do away with any articles in front of "birthday song" since this is sort of a list?)02br
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003. Congratulatory notes by friends02br
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004. Fun games 02br
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00Bring all your friends too. All are welcome. 02br
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00Love, BJ02br
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01i00______________________________________________________________02i0-
  

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0Hi,02br 02br 01font 00 BIRTHDAY PARTY02font 02br 02br 01font 00Place: my house02font 02br 02br 01font 00Date: January 14, 200_02font 02br 02br 01font 00Hi all my friends. 02font 02br 02br 01font 001. )02font 02br 02br 01font 002.

— Clive

  • 0Hi,02br 02br 01font 00 BIRTHDAY PARTY02font 02br 02br 01font 00Place: my house02font 02br 02br 01font 00Date: January 14, 200_02font 02br 02br 01font 00Hi all my friends.
  • 02font 02br 02br 01font 001.
  • )02font 02br 02br 01font 002.
  • )02font 00 It's just point form, so there are no real rules to apply, it's mainly just common usage.
  • Sounds better with 'a', or saying 'singing of birthday song'.
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0Hi,02br
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01font00 BIRTHDAY PARTY02font02br
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01font00Place: my house02font02br
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01font00Date: January 14, 200_02font02br
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01font00Hi all my friends. I am celebratin
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0Thank you.02br
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001. Do you need any articles before "birthday song"? Like there,02br
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01i00singing of 01u00a or the????02u00 birthday song.02i02br
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00How about the phrase "singing of a Christmas carol"? Is the article "a" necessary? 02br
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002. Why didn't you pla
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1font00Hi again,02font02br
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001. Do you need any articles before "birthday song"? Like there,02br
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01i00singing of 01u00a or the????02u00 birthday song.02i02br
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00How about the phrase "singing of a Christmas carol"? Is the article "a" necessary? 02
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