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ALAS Posted 20 years ago
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biography
would anyone mind reading the begining of my biography and correct it.
How can i write a good story?
I was born in a small village. It have been placed in the beautiful apricot garden therefore everyone calls it Pazardaloo.It was quite, visible, remote and had very kindly people. It seemed they are in the one family. I had very small world in my mind during childhood and my life in the village .I taught the farthest point in the world is the peak of small mountain near our village. I wished one day I could go there.
I taught the fortune man is someone who knows farming, gardening, swimming and other villager activities .As I was growing, my expectations were growing too. In our small school I wished I became the best student and fortunately I did. One day my teacher said me that I should go to the city and take apart in the big educational competition .I did and incredibly I won. I had been the first in the many smart students. It was turning point in my life because I discovered there are many things in the word that I don’t have but I could have………
How can i write a good story?
I was born in a small village. It have been placed in the beautiful apricot garden therefore everyone calls it Pazardaloo.It was quite, visible, remote and had very kindly people. It seemed they are in the one family. I had very small world in my mind during childhood and my life in the village .I taught the farthest point in the world is the peak of small mountain near our village. I wished one day I could go there.
I taught the fortune man is someone who knows farming, gardening, swimming and other villager activities .As I was growing, my expectations were growing too. In our small school I wished I became the best student and fortunately I did. One day my teacher said me that I should go to the city and take apart in the big educational competition .I did and incredibly I won. I had been the first in the many smart students. It was turning point in my life because I discovered there are many things in the word that I don’t have but I could have………
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ALAS would anyone mind reading the begining of my biography and correct it. How can i write a good story? I was born in a small village.
- ALAS would anyone mind reading the begining of my biography and correct it.
- How can i write a good story?
- I was born in a small village.
- It was quite, visible, remote and had very kind people.
- It seemed as if they were a family.
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ALASwould anyone mind reading the begining of my biography and correct it.
How can i write a good story?
I was born in a small village. It had been placed in the beautiful apricot garden therefore everyone used to call it Pazardaloo.It was quite, visible, remote and had very
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village. I taught
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