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Lmariann Posted 21 years ago
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Biography
Would you mind to correct this biography? It is a short curriculum vitae of a Hungarian musician...
Thanks for your help!
Dani Karanyi was born in Budapest in 1982, Hungary. He learnt classical piano for over 6 years, and he loved the early progressive rock bands like Pink Floyd, Peter Gabriel, King Crimson, Jetro Tull. After a while he begun to make own music on his first computer and he made a lot of experimental track. When he was 18 he went to Underground Records and one year later they relased his first album called ’Oktogon’. The first album was a fusion of classical, jazz and electronical music and Dani became famous by ’Dallam’. Many remixers (Paul Rogers, Fandora, Easy Life Natural, Mannel, Pluto Project, Banyek) made remixes for this song and relased on many complination discs around Europe – like in France, German, Brittan, Holland, Greece, and Italy.
Dani also worked with other artist in Hungary and abroad - like Addie Brik (singer from the early Red Hot Chilli Peppers), co-produced a hungarian pop band (Ízis – Sony Music), written film score (’A Valóság’ – Independent), made videogame music and effects (’Sir Atrhur’) and composed music for a play.
ROAD TO HOME / HAZAÚT – EP & video
In april 2004 he changed publisher and he went to CLS Records. He made his first EP called Road to Home (in hungarian ’Hazaút’). The new material is much different like before: more popular, more exciting then ever. This is the first only-on-internet EP in Hungary.
Many artists made their remixes for Road To Home like Szakos Krisztián, Andrewboy, AudioToolz, Zoohacker és Ch.i.p.
The Road To Home video is different too like most of the hungarian videos. It’s a fully 3D designed action video.
DIGITAL DIGITAL – the new album
The second album - called DIGITAL DIGITAL relased in november 2004. Many new artists collaborated on this album, like the vocalist Keszthelyi Virág, the American Chris Alexander (ex-Warpigs), Judie Jay, MC Jammin’, MC Columbo, and others.
The second album is more exicting like before. Most of the tracks are faster, stronger and popular ispirated by uk garage, breakbeat and classical music.
Live acts
Dani Karanyi – laptop
Virág Keszthelyi – vocals
***atonk – scratch
Relesed materials
- ’Oktogon’ album - Underground Records, 2001
- ’Dallam’ video - Four Cut - Underground Records, 2001
- ’Dallam’ EP - Underground Records, 2002
- ’Fruit Fly’ Karányi & Addie Brik London – Itza Records, 2004
- ’***’ remix
Balkan Fanatic – Warner Rec, 2003
- A valóság – Poppé Béla, filmscore 2003
- King Arthur videogame music, 2003
- ’Világíts’ remix Nulladik Változat, 2000
- ’Úton’ remix, Unique, Warner Rec, 2004
- ’Road to Home’ EP – CLS Recordings, 2004
- ’DIGITAL DIGITAL’ album - CLS Recordings, 2004
Live Acts
- Karányi-Fandora-Superbus_
Citadella – 2002 september
Nap Hall – 2002 november
- Karányi_
Check Awards, Home Club – 2003 january
A38 – 2003 march
Sziget Festival, Wan2 stage – 2003 july
Buena Vista Café – 2003 august
Menza Café – 2003 september
Szeged, Cinetrip Festival – 2003 september
Jailhouse – 2003 november
Living Room – 2003 december
Jailhouse – 2004 april
Kanaan, Jailhouse – 2004 april
Sziget, Elektron Stage – 2004 august
Süss Fel Nap, AAD – 2004 october
A38, Dutch-Hungarian Event – 2004 november
A38, Digital Digital album relase party – 2004 december
Thanks for your help!
Dani Karanyi was born in Budapest in 1982, Hungary. He learnt classical piano for over 6 years, and he loved the early progressive rock bands like Pink Floyd, Peter Gabriel, King Crimson, Jetro Tull. After a while he begun to make own music on his first computer and he made a lot of experimental track. When he was 18 he went to Underground Records and one year later they relased his first album called ’Oktogon’. The first album was a fusion of classical, jazz and electronical music and Dani became famous by ’Dallam’. Many remixers (Paul Rogers, Fandora, Easy Life Natural, Mannel, Pluto Project, Banyek) made remixes for this song and relased on many complination discs around Europe – like in France, German, Brittan, Holland, Greece, and Italy.
Dani also worked with other artist in Hungary and abroad - like Addie Brik (singer from the early Red Hot Chilli Peppers), co-produced a hungarian pop band (Ízis – Sony Music), written film score (’A Valóság’ – Independent), made videogame music and effects (’Sir Atrhur’) and composed music for a play.
ROAD TO HOME / HAZAÚT – EP & video
In april 2004 he changed publisher and he went to CLS Records. He made his first EP called Road to Home (in hungarian ’Hazaút’). The new material is much different like before: more popular, more exciting then ever. This is the first only-on-internet EP in Hungary.
Many artists made their remixes for Road To Home like Szakos Krisztián, Andrewboy, AudioToolz, Zoohacker és Ch.i.p.
The Road To Home video is different too like most of the hungarian videos. It’s a fully 3D designed action video.
DIGITAL DIGITAL – the new album
The second album - called DIGITAL DIGITAL relased in november 2004. Many new artists collaborated on this album, like the vocalist Keszthelyi Virág, the American Chris Alexander (ex-Warpigs), Judie Jay, MC Jammin’, MC Columbo, and others.
The second album is more exicting like before. Most of the tracks are faster, stronger and popular ispirated by uk garage, breakbeat and classical music.
Live acts
Dani Karanyi – laptop
Virág Keszthelyi – vocals
***atonk – scratch
Relesed materials
- ’Oktogon’ album - Underground Records, 2001
- ’Dallam’ video - Four Cut - Underground Records, 2001
- ’Dallam’ EP - Underground Records, 2002
- ’Fruit Fly’ Karányi & Addie Brik London – Itza Records, 2004
- ’***’ remix
Balkan Fanatic – Warner Rec, 2003
- A valóság – Poppé Béla, filmscore 2003
- King Arthur videogame music, 2003
- ’Világíts’ remix Nulladik Változat, 2000
- ’Úton’ remix, Unique, Warner Rec, 2004
- ’Road to Home’ EP – CLS Recordings, 2004
- ’DIGITAL DIGITAL’ album - CLS Recordings, 2004
Live Acts
- Karányi-Fandora-Superbus_
Citadella – 2002 september
Nap Hall – 2002 november
- Karányi_
Check Awards, Home Club – 2003 january
A38 – 2003 march
Sziget Festival, Wan2 stage – 2003 july
Buena Vista Café – 2003 august
Menza Café – 2003 september
Szeged, Cinetrip Festival – 2003 september
Jailhouse – 2003 november
Living Room – 2003 december
Jailhouse – 2004 april
Kanaan, Jailhouse – 2004 april
Sziget, Elektron Stage – 2004 august
Süss Fel Nap, AAD – 2004 october
A38, Dutch-Hungarian Event – 2004 november
A38, Digital Digital album relase party – 2004 december
Top answer
You need to check over this carefully yourself as I get the impression that your English is good but you have been a bit sloppy! To look at the start: Dani Karanyi was born in Budapest in 1982, Hungary. Budapest, Hungary, in 1982.
- You need to check over this carefully yourself as I get the impression that your English is good but you have been a bit sloppy!
- To look at the start: Dani Karanyi was born in Budapest in 1982, Hungary.
- Budapest, Hungary, in 1982.
- He learnt classical piano for over 6 years, and he loved the early progressive rock bands like Pink Floyd, Peter Gabriel, King Crimson and Jetro Jethro Tull.
- After a while he begun began to make his own music on his first computer and he made a lot of experimental track tracks .
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You need to check over this carefully yourself as I get the impression that your English is good but you have been a bit sloppy!
To look at the start:
Dani Karanyi was born in Budapest in 1982, Hungary. Budapest, Hungary, in 1982. He learnt classical piano for over 6 years, and he loved the early progressive rock bands like Pink Floyd, Peter Gabriel, King Crimson a
To look at the start:
Dani Karanyi was born in Budapest in 1982, Hungary. Budapest, Hungary, in 1982. He learnt classical piano for over 6 years, and he loved the early progressive rock bands like Pink Floyd, Peter Gabriel, King Crimson a
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I've highlghted the mistakes in the first part in bold in my first reply. I'm sorry I don't have time to proof read the whole thing for you (please see first post in this section).
Most of your mistakes are to do with spelling and not using capitals and so on. These problems you can fix with a bit of effort.
In addition, a lot of this information is in the letter you are al
Most of your mistakes are to do with spelling and not using capitals and so on. These problems you can fix with a bit of effort.
In addition, a lot of this information is in the letter you are al
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I have corrected the biography. I don't want to disturb you, that's why I don't send the new version. Earlier I have fixed the spelling in the letter...Would you mind to check it? Thanks! In exchange for, I will send to you Karányi's second album:) If you want...
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