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Better wording? world's population
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The pie-chart gives population [ data ] for different [parts] of the world. [Overall], the [majority] of the world's people live in Asia and Africa.
The [biggest] regions of the world in terms of population are Asia, Africa, and Europe. Asia has [almost] 60% of the world’s people, [with] 3712 million. The [second] biggest area is Africa. It [totals] 813 million, less than one- [quarter] the size of Asia’s population.
Together, Europe, North and South America, and Oceania [comprise] just over quarter of the world’s population. Europe has 726 million, while North and South America account for 525 and 317 [respectively]. Finally, [Oceania's] tiny population makes up less than one percent of the world total.
In [conclusion], populations [vary] greatly by region, with Asia and Africa [making up] the biggest proportion.
The pie-chart gives population [ data ] for different [parts] of the world. [Overall], the [majority] of the world's people live in Asia and Africa.
The [biggest] regions of the world in terms of population are Asia, Africa, and Europe. Asia has [almost] 60% of the world’s people, [with] 3712 million. The [second] biggest area is Africa. It [totals] 813 million, less than one- [quarter] the size of Asia’s population.
Together, Europe, North and South America, and Oceania [comprise] just over quarter of the world’s population. Europe has 726 million, while North and South America account for 525 and 317 [respectively]. Finally, [Oceania's] tiny population makes up less than one percent of the world total.
In [conclusion], populations [vary] greatly by region, with Asia and Africa [making up] the biggest proportion.
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Hi, May I have your comments on the wording highlighted in blue? Thanks a lot. The pie-chart gives population [ data ] for different [parts] of the world.
- Hi, May I have your comments on the wording highlighted in blue?
- Thanks a lot.
- The pie-chart gives population [ data ] for different [parts] of the world.
- [Overall], the [majority] of the world's people live in Asia and Africa.
- The [biggest] regions of the world in terms of population are Asia, Africa, and Europe.
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Hi,
May I have your comments on the wording highlighted in blue? Thanks a lot.
The pie-chart gives population [ data ] for different [parts] of the world. [Overall], the [majority] of the world's people live in Asia and Africa.
The [biggest] regions of the world in terms of population are Asia, Africa, and Europe. Asia has [almost] 60% of the world’s peo
May I have your comments on the wording highlighted in blue? Thanks a lot.
The pie-chart gives population [ data ] for different [parts] of the world. [Overall], the [majority] of the world's people live in Asia and Africa.
The [biggest] regions of the world in terms of population are Asia, Africa, and Europe. Asia has [almost] 60% of the world’s peo
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