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Nshuzn Posted 4 years ago
Grammar

Better way to structure this sentence

This is the sentence,

As one of our newest customers we'd like to give you exclusive access to our membership plan completely free of cost.

We've just started our business and getting a few signups to whom I want to give our membership plan.

Is the "newest" word correct there? Can it be replaced with a better word?

  

Top answer

I would replace “newest” with “first few”. Hope this helps!

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  • I would replace “newest” with “first few”.
  • Hope this helps!
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I would replace “newest” with “first few”.

Hope this helps!

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