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Which one is the better way of the writing this statement-1.He had at the end of his meal of the dead lamb, which may have given him additional energy spirits, collected all the ewes into the corner.2.He had collected all the ewes into the corner after having his meal of the dead lamb, which may have given him additional energy spirits.

Mister Micawber · Accepted Answer

Both are rather bad.

Better way?

1.He had at the end of his meal of the dead lamb, which may have given him additional energy spirits, collected all the ewes into the corner.

2.He had collected all the ewes into the corner after having his meal of the dead lamb, which may have given him additional energy spirits.

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After eating the lamb, which may have invigorated him, he collected all the ewes into the corner.

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