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Contiluo Posted 15 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
Better than
How to combine the following sentences into one?
(1) The quality of products sold in Taiwan is good.
(2) The quaility of the same kind of products sold in Japan is better.
It is said that the quality of products sold in Japan is better than the same kind of that in Taiwan.
Is the above sentence acceptable?
(1) The quality of products sold in Taiwan is good.
(2) The quaility of the same kind of products sold in Japan is better.
It is said that the quality of products sold in Japan is better than the same kind of that in Taiwan.
Is the above sentence acceptable?
Top answer
Yes you can say that but I think it's unapproprite because you are making Taiwan's product like have low value. I suggest you say: The quality of products sold in Taiwan are good, but Japan's products are better. LB
- Yes you can say that but I think it's unapproprite because you are making Taiwan's product like have low value.
- I suggest you say: The quality of products sold in Taiwan are good, but Japan's products are better.
- LB
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Yes you can say that but I think it's unapproprite because you are making Taiwan's product like have low value.
I suggest you say:
The quality of products sold in Taiwan are good, but Japan's products are better.
LB
I suggest you say:
The quality of products sold in Taiwan are good, but Japan's products are better.
LB
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Hi, LB,
My original meaning is comparing the quality of products sold in both countries. But your sentence suggests a difference in level: it is comparing the products sold in Taiwan with those manufactured in Japan. So your sentence distorts my original meaning. However, another teacher revised the sentence as written. It would make more sense.
The quality of such products
My original meaning is comparing the quality of products sold in both countries. But your sentence suggests a difference in level: it is comparing the products sold in Taiwan with those manufactured in Japan. So your sentence distorts my original meaning. However, another teacher revised the sentence as written. It would make more sense.
The quality of such products
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