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Acbeat Posted 7 years ago
Grammar

Better sentence for the application

I'm making a application for diary. And at the selection for new window, I must choose the better question for the user. See the following. Can you read this? And if you like, could you reccommend a better sentence.

If you show this ID on the New Window, Click Emotion: yes

Or to close this window and show on it, Click Emotion: no

...I'm not good at English.

  

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Neither of those sentences really makes much sense. ) It is hard to know what to suggest without much more knowledge about the application. ".

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  • Neither of those sentences really makes much sense.
  • ) It is hard to know what to suggest without much more knowledge about the application.
  • ".
  • You may mean "in a new window" rather than "on the new window", but I'm not sure.
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Neither of those sentences really makes much sense. (Also, I think you have been subject to "icon attack"!) It is hard to know what to suggest without much more knowledge about the application. In the first sentence, you may mean "To show ..." rather than "If you show ...". You may mean "in a new window" rather than "on the new window", but I'm not sure. The second sentence prompts the questio

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