Better Sentence
The sad part is that even people who are close to me, the ones I address as ‘friends’ laugh at me.
Or
The sad part is that even people who are close to me, the ones I address as ‘friends’ are included in the laughing team.
Which sentence sounds better provided that "laughing team" is used figuratively for people who mock you or laugh at you and has been mentioned before the sentence?
Top answer
I prefer the first sentence. It's simpler and more direct. The sad part is that even people who are close to me, the ones I address as ‘friends’ comma laugh at me.
- I prefer the first sentence.
- It's simpler and more direct.
- The sad part is that even people who are close to me, the ones I address as ‘friends’ comma laugh at me.
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I prefer the first sentence. It's simpler and more direct.
The sad part is that even people who are close to me, the ones I address as ‘friends’ comma laugh at me.
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