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Anonymous Posted 15 years ago
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Best way to write the following sentence

(WHAT IS THE BEST WAY TO WRITE SUCH A MESSAGE)

Hi Brian

I was wondering if you've received my sales resume and if there are any improvments needed doing.

Kind Regards
Sarah. A
  

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Hi Brian , I was wondering if you've received my sales resume and if there are any improvements needed. Kind regards, Sarah

— Mister Micawber

  • Hi Brian , I was wondering if you've received my sales resume and if there are any improvements needed.
  • Kind regards, Sarah
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Hi Brian,

I was wondering if you've received my sales resume and if there are any improvements needed.

Kind regards,


Sarah
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