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Cahaya Kebahagiaan Posted 14 years ago
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Best holiday visit
I am glad to share my last trip. But I do not know how to put it in words. Can you all enlighten me?
Recently I went to visit my brother in Japan. Visiting Japan is an eye opening actually. I managed to learn their culture and advanced technology.
Japanese people are very punctual and discipline. Time management for nearly all public transportation is at top notch. We have tried all the services, be it taxi,bus,train and rapid transit such as subway. Apart from the cleanliness is very impressive.
Also they are people with pride, a superb behaviour you cannot find in other part of the world. They are very generous. Failure to do so means a real shame. Recalled back one incident that happen when I lost my glove on my way to the train station, this Japanese lady kindly returned it to me, while she was rushing to commute in. She is helping me for good.
The most astonishing feature is the technology that they have. The technologies are invented for the betterment of the citizen especially elderly, women and disabled people. For example, railway station was designed without compromising any safety aspect. Let say if you accidentally dropped into the rail track, you have the opportunity to hide safely under there until the official security come in. Next, I found Non-step bus, a user friendly bus for handicapped. It is a tilting bus when it comes to the destination so that the passengers do not have to step down the stair. Apart from that, there is easily accessible vending machine with selection of healthier food choices.
For me this is the wonderful trip and I started to fall in love with Japan because of their beauty.
Recently I went to visit my brother in Japan. Visiting Japan is an eye opening actually. I managed to learn their culture and advanced technology.
Japanese people are very punctual and discipline. Time management for nearly all public transportation is at top notch. We have tried all the services, be it taxi,bus,train and rapid transit such as subway. Apart from the cleanliness is very impressive.
Also they are people with pride, a superb behaviour you cannot find in other part of the world. They are very generous. Failure to do so means a real shame. Recalled back one incident that happen when I lost my glove on my way to the train station, this Japanese lady kindly returned it to me, while she was rushing to commute in. She is helping me for good.
The most astonishing feature is the technology that they have. The technologies are invented for the betterment of the citizen especially elderly, women and disabled people. For example, railway station was designed without compromising any safety aspect. Let say if you accidentally dropped into the rail track, you have the opportunity to hide safely under there until the official security come in. Next, I found Non-step bus, a user friendly bus for handicapped. It is a tilting bus when it comes to the destination so that the passengers do not have to step down the stair. Apart from that, there is easily accessible vending machine with selection of healthier food choices.
For me this is the wonderful trip and I started to fall in love with Japan because of their beauty.
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Hi, It's a great writing, I just have some suggestions: Recently, I went to visit my brother in Japan. Visiting Japan is/was actually an eye-opening experience . I managed to learn about their culture and advanced technology.
- Hi, It's a great writing, I just have some suggestions: Recently, I went to visit my brother in Japan.
- Visiting Japan is/was actually an eye-opening experience .
- I managed to learn about their culture and advanced technology.
- Japanese people are very punctual and disciplined.
- (This is a fact, so we don't need to change are into were ) We have tried all the services, such as : taxi,bus,train...
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Hi,
It's a great writing, I just have some suggestions:
Recently, I went to visit my brother in Japan. Visiting Japan is/was actually an eye-opening experience. I managed to learn about their culture and advanced technology.
Japanese people are very punctual and disciplined. (This is a fact, so we don't need to change are into were)
We hav
It's a great writing, I just have some suggestions:
Recently, I went to visit my brother in Japan. Visiting Japan is/was actually an eye-opening experience. I managed to learn about their culture and advanced technology.
Japanese people are very punctual and disciplined. (This is a fact, so we don't need to change are into were)
We hav
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