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Anonymous Posted 11 years ago
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best day of my life
plzzz... check this para... it is correct or not. please correct it and u like to add something in it so please add some more contest.
The best day ever for me is ,definitely, 20.02.2015. because on that my photo with my name was published in the newspaper for my coin creation. On that day one of my friend call me and say hey mayur have u read today's newspaper. I said no I asked my friend what happen she replied that your photo is published with very good description about ur coin creation . First I think she will making fool or make a joke with me but when I saw the newspaper I was surprised. On that day I make my parents proud with this . On that day I receive lots of congratulation calls and massages . Next day where ever I go people were asked me ,"is that u in the yesterday's newspaper whose photo were there. Means everyone who meet me wants to know how did I do that or how did I make coins building. Before that day nobody supports me for that but after that day everybody encourage me and supports me too.
The best day ever for me is ,definitely, 20.02.2015. because on that my photo with my name was published in the newspaper for my coin creation. On that day one of my friend call me and say hey mayur have u read today's newspaper. I said no I asked my friend what happen she replied that your photo is published with very good description about ur coin creation . First I think she will making fool or make a joke with me but when I saw the newspaper I was surprised. On that day I make my parents proud with this . On that day I receive lots of congratulation calls and massages . Next day where ever I go people were asked me ,"is that u in the yesterday's newspaper whose photo were there. Means everyone who meet me wants to know how did I do that or how did I make coins building. Before that day nobody supports me for that but after that day everybody encourage me and supports me too.
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There are lots of mistakes. I have highlighted some of them. If you correct your paragraph and post the corrected version, then we can proceed to make it better.
- There are lots of mistakes.
- I have highlighted some of them.
- If you correct your paragraph and post the corrected version, then we can proceed to make it better.
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There are lots of mistakes. I have highlighted some of them. If you correct your paragraph and post the corrected version, then we can proceed to make it better.
The best day ever for me is ,definitely, 20.02.2015. because on that day my photo with my name was published in the newspaper for my coin creation (Did you create a coin?). On that day one of my friends
The best day ever for me is ,definitely, 20.02.2015. because on that day my photo with my name was published in the newspaper for my coin creation (Did you create a coin?). On that day one of my friends
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AnonymousThe best day of my lifeplzzz...Would someone check this paragraph for me please?it isIs it correct or not? Please correct it andu like toaddsomething in it so please addsome more contentcontest.if you like.
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