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Nikitus Posted 10 years ago
Grammar

Besides sometimes, Kevin waited outside my house

Hello.

Is the following grammatically correct?

"Besides sometimes, Kevin waited outside my house, and looked at me like as if he wanted to say something. Once I try to get close, apologize and talk to him. I stared at him and he stared at me, but nobody talked. The whole situation was very strange."

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Besides sometimes, Kevin waited outside my house, and looked at me like as if he wanted to say something. Once I try to get close, apologize and talk to him. I stared at him and he stared at me, but nobody talked.

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  • Besides sometimes, Kevin waited outside my house, and looked at me like as if he wanted to say something.
  • Once I try to get close, apologize and talk to him.
  • I stared at him and he stared at me, but nobody talked.
  • The whole situation was very strange.
  • Misplaced comma.
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Besides sometimes, Kevin waited outside my house, and looked at me like as if he wanted to say something. Once I try to get close, apologize and talk to him. I stared at him and he stared at me, but nobody talked. The whole situation was very strange.

Misplaced comma. Wrong tense.
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"Besides sometimes Kevin waited outside my house, and looked at me like as if he wanted to say something. Once I tried to get close, apologize and talk to him. I stared at him and he stared at me, but nobody talked. The whole situation was very strange."

After the changes, are the sentences grammatically correct?

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"Besides, sometimes Kevin waited outside my house, and looked at me like as if he wanted to say something. Once I tried to get close, apologize and talk to him. I stared at him and he stared at me, but nobody talked. The whole situation was very strange."

You can re-cast the 2nd and 3rd sentences to the present.
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