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Benefits of the inernet

topic: write a paragraph about benefits of the internet.

These days, with a significant breakthrough in the technology, there is an increase in the number of people using modern device especially the Internet. why is the Internet so attractive? Let's find out some benefits. First of all, the Internet is a virtual treasure of information. In a matter of a few seconds, with a click, you can find any kinds of an information on any topics. Therefore, I think it is a good source for students to study. Another positive aspect of the internet is that it shorten the distance among the people. for instance, they can use facebook, zalo, skype,... to face to face at any time, at anywhere. Entertainment is also another popular reason why people concentrate much time on surfing the Internet. After a day snowing under with paperwork, people let their hair down to decrease their stress. They like playing games online, reading newspapers, watching videos, listening to music,.... The internet plays a crucial part in our modern life . Besides its advantages, we should not focus on this because it has bad effects to our heath.

  

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These days, with a significant breakthrough in the technology , (Which technology are you talking about? Self-driving cars? ) there is an increase in the number of people using modern device (What device are you talking about?

  • These days, with a significant breakthrough in the technology , (Which technology are you talking about?
  • Self-driving cars?
  • ) there is an increase in the number of people using modern device (What device are you talking about?
  • ) especially the Internet.
  • (The Internet is not a device.
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These days, with a significant breakthrough in the technology, (Which technology are you talking about? Self-driving cars? Global positioning?) there is an increase in the number of people using modern device (What device are you talking about? ) especially the Internet. (The Internet is not a device. A device is something that is small and descrete.)

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