Being healthy is more important than to be rich

Some people believe that it is more important to be healthy than to be rich. I have the same concept as them due to a number of reasons.

To begin with, Money cannot buy health despite of having the ability of acquire the best medical system, however, money is earned through good health. If our health is affected by a grave disease like cancer or HIV, money could only provide the best treatments and doctors but it could never give us back our healthy body.

In addition, health bring us the opportunity of enjoy our life. For example, when we are healthy we can do all the things we like such as going on holidays, doing some sports, gathering with family and friends, eating our favourite food and so on. But if we fell ill, we are restricted to do many of those activities in order to have a good recovery.

What is more, being rich comes with a lot of problems. One of the major problems is the greed. Many people become so obsessed with having more and more money that they start working more hours per day forgetting about their health. As a result of this, they may end up suffering of stress or anxiety. Another big problem of having a lot of money is the difficulty of establish relationships. Rich people cannot distinguish between the ones who approach to them because of their money and those who not.

All in all, I believe that being healthy is the foundation we need to obtain everything in life and enjoy it, this includes having money. So health is much more important than wealth.

Please let me know what do you thing about my essay. Suggestions and corrections would be a lot of help to me since I'm preparing myself for the IELTS exam.