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Deepcosmos Posted 4 years ago
Grammar

‘being associated with vulgarity’

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Faced with competition from the bourgeois, the courtiers could not resort to overt violence as in the past. Instead, their fears were manifested in a general revulsion, with disgust at anything that ‘smelt bourgeois' being associated with vulgarity. Courtiers competed instead by means of manners, modifying their speech, gestures and social amusements to maintain a distinctive distance from the unpleasant pressure from below.”

While I assume the underlined part above is an adverbial participle clause in the relative clause starting with ‘that’, modifying ‘anything’, I will appreciate upon your valuable opinions.

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https://books.google.co.kr/books?id=dFjmDKmW52AC&pg=PA67&lpg=PA67&dq=%22with+disgust+at+anything+that+%E2%80%98smelt+bourgeois%27+being+associated+with+vulgarity%22&source=bl&ots=8vO2A04WZW&sig=ACfU3U3Budze7neVCy0OT7wJEwGdxquztQ&hl=ko&sa=X&ved=2ahUKEwiwoJ2i6MX2AhXV3GEKHSW8DSoQ6AF6BAgCEAM#v=onepage&q=%22with%20disgust%20at%20anything%20that%20%E2%80%98smelt%20bourgeois'%20being%20associated%20with%20vulgarity%22&f=false

  

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deepcosmos While I assume the underlined part above is an adverbial participle clause in the relative clause starting with ‘that’, modifying ‘anything’, I will appreciate upon your valuable opinions. It is a defective sentence. The "being" clause works against "with disgust".

  • deepcosmos While I assume the underlined part above is an adverbial participle clause in the relative clause starting with ‘that’, modifying ‘anything’, I will appreciate upon your valuable opinions.
  • It is a defective sentence.
  • The "being" clause works against "with disgust".
  • Remove one or the other to fix it: Instead, their fears were manifested in a general revulsion, with disgust at anything that ‘smelt bourgeois'.
  • OR Instead, their fears were manifested in a general revulsion, with anything that ‘smelt bourgeois' being associated with vulgarity.
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deepcosmosWhile I assume the underlined part above is an adverbial participle clause in the relative clause starting with ‘that’, modifying ‘anything’, I will appreciate upon your valuable opinions.

It is a defective sentence. The "being" clause works against "with disgust". Remove one or the other to fix it:

Instead, their fears were manifested in a

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