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User_gary Posted 19 years ago
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being a real member of this team

0I am being a real member of this team. I hope soon I will retire with a better note. 02br
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0I am a real member of this team. 02br 02br 00I hope I will retire soon with (a better note - I don't understand what you mean). 02br 02br 00I will will retire soon with, I hope, a better note.

— Nona the brit

  • 0I am a real member of this team.
  • 02br 02br 00I hope I will retire soon with (a better note - I don't understand what you mean).
  • 02br 02br 00I will will retire soon with, I hope, a better note.
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0I am a real member of this team. 02br
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00I hope I will retire soon with (a better note - I don't understand what you mean). The hope relates to retiring soon.02br
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00I will will retire soon with, I hope, a better note. The hope relates to getting the better note, whatever that is.0-
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10I am a real member of this team. 12br
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10I hope I will retire soon with (a better note - I don't understand what you mean). The hope relates to retiring soon.12br
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10I will will retire soon with, I hope, a better note. The hope relates to getting t
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0Ah I see. The phrase is 'on a better note' not with - I assume it's a musical metaphor.02br
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00I don't think it is appropriate as you only use it when it contrasts with a previous very poor/bad situation. If you retire on a better note then it means that people have a poor opinion of you now.0-
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