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Beijing Olympics

The Chinese government is once again showing it undemocratic side by forcing major polluting plants in Beijing to shut down a month before the Beijing Olympics. The move is part of the government effort in battling the hazy skies. On top of that, hundreds of projectiles containing condensation chemical have been fired into the sky to stimulate rain in the hopes that rainfall will shower away the smoggy air. So far, air quality has not been satisfactory which is irritating the government that hopes the games will give its international trade partners an opportunity to witness its glory.

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The Chinese government is once again showing it s undemocratic side by forcing the major polluters polluting plants in Beijing to shut down a month before the Beijing Olympics. The move is part of the government 's effort to clean up in battle ing the hazy skies. On top of that, hundreds of projectiles containing a condensation chemical have been fired into the sky to stimulate rain in the hopes that rainfall will wash shower away the smog gy air .

— RayH

  • The Chinese government is once again showing it s undemocratic side by forcing the major polluters polluting plants in Beijing to shut down a month before the Beijing Olympics.
  • The move is part of the government 's effort to clean up in battle ing the hazy skies.
  • On top of that, hundreds of projectiles containing a condensation chemical have been fired into the sky to stimulate rain in the hopes that rainfall will wash shower away the smog gy air .
  • So far, air quality has not been satisfactory which is irritating to the government since it that hopes the games will give its international trade partners an opportunity to witness its glory.
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The Chinese government is once again showing its undemocratic side by forcing the major polluters polluting plants in Beijing to shut down a month before the Beijing Olympics. The move is part of the government's effort to
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Thanks, RayH. A couple of questions.

1. Major polluters could include vehicles and planes. How to focus on factories/plants?
2. What's battling hazy skies wrong?
3. What's the difference between irritating and irritating to?
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The Chinese government is once again showing its undemocratic side by forcing the major industrial polluters polluting plants in Beijing to shut down a month before the Beijing Olympics. The move is part of the government's effort
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