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Jackson6612 Posted 18 years ago
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Before someone wants to have freedom of expression...
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Before someone wants to have freedom of expression, firstly he must have freedom of thought which he can aquire from himself. In this way, whatever he says will be dictated by his rationale rather than his prejudices.
Before someone wants to have freedom of expression, firstly he must have freedom of thought which he can aquire from himself. In this way, whatever he says will be dictated by his rationale rather than his prejudices.
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Jackson6612 Please make corrections/edits to the following text: Before someone wants to have freedom of expression, firstly he must have freedom of thought which he can aquire from himself. In this way, whatever he says will be dictated by his rationale rather than his prejudices. Hi Jackson, First, I am not quite sure about your usage of 'must have freedom of thought'.
- Jackson6612 Please make corrections/edits to the following text: Before someone wants to have freedom of expression, firstly he must have freedom of thought which he can aquire from himself.
- In this way, whatever he says will be dictated by his rationale rather than his prejudices.
- Hi Jackson, First, I am not quite sure about your usage of 'must have freedom of thought'.
- To me, the freedom of thought should be automatic and non-restraint (by any external forces).
- Nobody can prison what is in your brain (or rather your mind).
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Jackson6612Please make corrections/edits to the following text:Hi Jackson,
Before someone wants to have freedom of expression, firstly he must have freedom of thought which he can aquire from himself. In this way, whatever he says will be dictated by his rationale rather than his prejudices.
First, I am not
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