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Moguwai007 Posted 12 years ago
Grammar
Before proceeding with booking.
I would like to use the following sentence for a description on an online reservation system of a hotel.
In simple words, it means "If you are not a member, do you want to become a member or do you want to proceed with booking without becoming a member? There are three options before proceeding with booking.
Could you please tell me if the following sentence sounds natural?
I wish to make it formal yet very short as well due to limited space.
For non-members, please select [Register to Reserve]or [Reserve without register] to input your information.
1) Registered Members
Log in to Reserve
2) [Register to Reserve]
3) [Reserve without register]
In simple words, it means "If you are not a member, do you want to become a member or do you want to proceed with booking without becoming a member? There are three options before proceeding with booking.
Could you please tell me if the following sentence sounds natural?
I wish to make it formal yet very short as well due to limited space.
For non-members, please select [Register to Reserve]or [Reserve without register] to input your information.
1) Registered Members
Log in to Reserve
2) [Register to Reserve]
3) [Reserve without register]
Top answer
For non-members, please select [Register to Reserve] or [Reserve without registering ] 1) Registered Members: [Log in to Reserve] 2) [Register to Reserve] 3) [Reserve without registering]
- For non-members, please select [Register to Reserve] or [Reserve without registering ] 1) Registered Members: [Log in to Reserve] 2) [Register to Reserve] 3) [Reserve without registering]
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For non-members, please select [Register to Reserve] or [Reserve without registering]
1) Registered Members: [Log in to Reserve]
2) [Register to Reserve]
3) [Reserve without registering]
1) Registered Members: [Log in to Reserve]
2) [Register to Reserve]
3) [Reserve without registering]
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Thank you very much for your corrections.
May I ask you one thing?
Why do you uncapitalize "registering"?
Is [Reserve without registering] better than [Reserve without Registering] in this case?
I am curious about the difference.
May I ask you one thing?
Why do you uncapitalize "registering"?
Is [Reserve without registering] better than [Reserve without Registering] in this case?
I am curious about the difference.
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moguwai007May I ask you one thing?Why do you uncapitalize "registering"?My mistake, moguwai. Either capitalize in 1, 2 and 3 or use small letters in 1, 2, and 3. Either is OK; just be consistent.
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