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Onelook Posted 7 years ago
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The animal was classified in that category, because people had a hard time classifying it, but that category made the most sense for most world-renown experts at that time, before it was put in a different category.


The animal was classified in that category, because people had a hard time classifying it, which was because of the lack of categories at that time, but that category made the most sense for most world-renown experts at that time, before it was put in a different category.

  

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That's a bit better, but do you mean this The animal was classified in that category. . before it was put in a different category.

  • That's a bit better, but do you mean this The animal was classified in that category.
  • .
  • before it was put in a different category.
  • or do you mean this?
  • .
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That's a bit better, but do you mean this

The animal was classified in that category. . . before it was put in a different category.

or do you mean this?

. . . but that category made the most sense . . . before it was put in a different category.

You need to make it easier for the reader to follow your meaning. The simplest way to do that is to break

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