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Diotima Posted 11 years ago
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Beauty products
I am translating some product leaflets, would you please check if grammar and style of these sentences are correct&appropriate?
1) "The product formula is suitable for all skin types, from oily to dry."
2)"Regular use of the mask allows you to remove gently dead skin cells, restore elasticity and suppleness."
3) "Its advanced foam free formulation, makes it biodegradable and suitable also for beach use."
4)"Using aftersun cream is just as important as any other quality sunscreen product."
Could you please please also clarify whether aftersun is one word as an adjective and a two-word noun (e.g. using after sun is just as important as...) or it is a wrong impression of mine...I checked different websites and I have found all sorts of spelling: aftersun, after sun, after-sun and I do not understand how is that and why.
Thanks a million
1) "The product formula is suitable for all skin types, from oily to dry."
2)"Regular use of the mask allows you to remove gently dead skin cells, restore elasticity and suppleness."
3) "Its advanced foam free formulation, makes it biodegradable and suitable also for beach use."
4)"Using aftersun cream is just as important as any other quality sunscreen product."
Could you please please also clarify whether aftersun is one word as an adjective and a two-word noun (e.g. using after sun is just as important as...) or it is a wrong impression of mine...I checked different websites and I have found all sorts of spelling: aftersun, after sun, after-sun and I do not understand how is that and why.
Thanks a million
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diotima The product formula is suitable for all skin types, from oily to dry. OK diotima Regular use of the mask allows you to gently remove gently dead skin cells and restore elasticity and suppleness. diotima Its advanced foa m-f ree formulatio n m akes it biodegradable and suitable ( also ) for beach use.
- diotima The product formula is suitable for all skin types, from oily to dry.
- OK diotima Regular use of the mask allows you to gently remove gently dead skin cells and restore elasticity and suppleness.
- diotima Its advanced foa m-f ree formulatio n m akes it biodegradable and suitable ( also ) for beach use.
- diotima Using aftersun cream is just as important as any other quality sunscreen product.
- OK diotima Could you please please also clarify whether " aftersun " is a on e-w ord as an adjective and or a two-word noun ?
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diotima The product formula is suitable for all skin types, from oily to dry.OK
diotima Regular use of the mask allows you to gently removegentlydead skin cells and restore elasticity and suppleness.
diotima Its advanced foam-free formulation makes it
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