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Antonija Posted 20 years ago
Vocabulary
beauties/magic
Hi,
Can you pelase help me find an adequate phrase to make this sound better. I have a liberty of changing the text if it is necessary to make it sound more natural and appealing to readers. Thank you
Boris Velican, a thirty-year-old Croatian producer who lives in the City of Zagreb discovered the beauties/magic of travelling rather early, immediately after he finished highschool.
Can you pelase help me find an adequate phrase to make this sound better. I have a liberty of changing the text if it is necessary to make it sound more natural and appealing to readers. Thank you
Boris Velican, a thirty-year-old Croatian producer who lives in the City of Zagreb discovered the beauties/magic of travelling rather early, immediately after he finished highschool.
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According to me "magical attraction of travelling" sounds more meaningful.
- According to me "magical attraction of travelling" sounds more meaningful.
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According to me "magical attraction of travelling" sounds more meaningful.
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Hello Antonija
It's more usual to say "travel", when you want to express the general concept.
You might say here "the charm of travel" or "the magic of travel". The latter is a little extravagant, though.
"High school" is probably better as two words.
MrP
It's more usual to say "travel", when you want to express the general concept.
You might say here "the charm of travel" or "the magic of travel". The latter is a little extravagant, though.
"High school" is probably better as two words.
MrP
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