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User_gary Posted 19 years ago
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Bearing roll no. 148, I hereby inform you that

0Bearing roll no. 148, I hereby inform you that I have missed out all my exams which held on last month as you know. I hereby inform you that I will be attending college from next month, and I request you to write re-exams which will be held on next month.02br
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0It's all a little pompous with the 'hereby's and 'bearing'. Is there a need for this? OR would you like a more natural version?

— Nona the brit

  • 0It's all a little pompous with the 'hereby's and 'bearing'.
  • Is there a need for this?
  • OR would you like a more natural version?
  • Also, can you just inform them of this as you missed your exams, wouldn't you need to ask if you could return and do the exams later?
  • 02br 02br 00Bearing roll no 148 (is this a student registration number or something, I'd just put the number at the top of the letter in the subject line.
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0It's all a little pompous with the 'hereby's and 'bearing'. Is there a need for this? OR would you like a more natural version? Also, can you just inform them of this as you missed your exams, wouldn't you need to ask if you could return and do the exams later? This sounds rather arrogant.02br
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