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An Jiyoung Posted 20 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
Bathing Culture
Could you read and correct them for me? I wrote about bathing culture in Korea.
One of the weekend events for Korean family is going to public bathhouse in neighbor.
There are public bath for woman and man separately.
I guess that there is not much difference on bathing method in each country. But The following is the step Korean always do in the public bath.
After soaking the body into a public bath tube or sitting in the sauna a few minutes,
We wash off dead skin cells with this square-shaped washing glove. Kids dislike it because it could be painful when their mother or father scrubs their body with it. Some people say that it stimulates the skin so don’t scrub the skin.
But I think we, Korean feel clean after this process of bathing.
One of the weekend events for Korean family is going to public bathhouse in neighbor.
There are public bath for woman and man separately.
I guess that there is not much difference on bathing method in each country. But The following is the step Korean always do in the public bath.
After soaking the body into a public bath tube or sitting in the sauna a few minutes,
We wash off dead skin cells with this square-shaped washing glove. Kids dislike it because it could be painful when their mother or father scrubs their body with it. Some people say that it stimulates the skin so don’t scrub the skin.
But I think we, Korean feel clean after this process of bathing.
Top answer
Hi, I've made some changes. Please read carefully. In N.
- Hi, I've made some changes.
- Please read carefully.
- In N.
- America, and in most Western countries, there is no tradition of public bathing.
- It is done at home, in private.
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Hi,
I've made some changes. Please read carefully.
In N. America, and in most Western countries, there is no tradition of public bathing. It is done at home, in private.
You have written in what I think of as a Korean style of English. I mean that you have very short senences, and they are not in the form of paragraphs. A native speaker would typically place all these in
I've made some changes. Please read carefully.
In N. America, and in most Western countries, there is no tradition of public bathing. It is done at home, in private.
You have written in what I think of as a Korean style of English. I mean that you have very short senences, and they are not in the form of paragraphs. A native speaker would typically place all these in
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