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Tostyle un Posted 8 years ago
Grammar

Basic English

Is this correct English ?

"She is dated nearly 9 men and she could not get along with any of them."

How about using one of them in the place of any of them ?

Thank you.

  

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"She is dated" should be "She has dated" (or just "She dated"). This is the main error of English. It is good style to write small numbers in words — in this case "nine men" rather than "9 men".

  • "She is dated" should be "She has dated" (or just "She dated").
  • This is the main error of English.
  • It is good style to write small numbers in words — in this case "nine men" rather than "9 men".
  • "nearly nine" is a bit odd.
  • Does it mean eight?
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"She is dated" should be "She has dated" (or just "She dated"). This is the main error of English.

It is good style to write small numbers in words — in this case "nine men" rather than "9 men".

"nearly nine" is a bit odd. Does it mean eight? Seven? We usually use "nearly" with larger round numbers, e.g. "nearly 100".

Consider writing "but" instead of "and".

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