No. Before concerning whether it is natural, you should focus on getting the meaning of your sentence across. This sounds like a conversation between a writer and a publisher.
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AnonymousWhich is natural?Neither is natural. Try this: Our offer will depend on the number of copies we already have.
alc24You'll either go to a good college or a bad one depending on the grades you get.
You'll either go to a good college or a bad one based on the grades you get.
Your version:Following your example I assume you would word the sentence like : Your going to a good college depends on the grades you get.All of you