I acquired a doctor's certificate and a passport, based on Section 6 of the immigration law admitting students, and went to the American Consulate General in Shanghai for a visa. (Chiang Monlin, Tides From The West, page 67)
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Yes. I prefer this version. In accordance with Section 6 of the immigration law admitting students , I acquired a doctor's certificate and a passport,, and went to the American Consulate General in Shanghai for a visa.
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Yes. I prefer this version.
In accordance with Section 6 of the immigration law admitting students, I acquired a doctor's certificate and a passport,, and went to the American Consulate General in Shanghai for a visa. (Chiang Monlin, Tides From The West, page 67)