Base on these form, where should the term of "Chiang Mai Province" in the first sentence be appeared in the new second form

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Base on my thesis’s topic name "Potentiality on Garlic Supply Chain Management to Supermarket of The Fang District Garlic Producers Cooperative, ", and The veteran had suggested me as new form below.

The potential of The Fang District Garlic Producers' Cooperative to supply garlic to the supermarket, with particular emphasis on their supply chain.
So, my question is that is it no need to use the words of “Supply Chain Management” in the new form above?

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