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Antonija Posted 8 years ago
Vocabulary

Base note

Hello!


Is the sentence OK, does it sound natural?


It is highly appreciated oil in perfume industry and is thus the base note of some of the world’s most popular perfumes.


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There is a problem of sense. It says that the reason this oil is the base note of many perfumes is that it is highly appreciated. That does not seem like a reason for making it one note or the other, or any note at all.

  • There is a problem of sense.
  • It says that the reason this oil is the base note of many perfumes is that it is highly appreciated.
  • That does not seem like a reason for making it one note or the other, or any note at all.
  • Its being appreciated is not a characteristic of it.
  • That aside, there are two words missing: It is a highly appreciated oil in the perfume industry and is thus the base note of some of the world’s most popular perfumes.
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There is a problem of sense. It says that the reason this oil is the base note of many perfumes is that it is highly appreciated. That does not seem like a reason for making it one note or the other, or any note at all. Its being appreciated is not a characteristic of it.

That aside, there are two words missing:

It is a highly appreciated oil in the perfume industry and is t

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