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Onelook Posted 8 years ago
Grammar

Barged in

The cops screamed "Police, open up!" and then barged in into the apartment as soon as the door was opened and shot at the suspect.


How would you rephrase this in a more concise way. Doesn't sound like something that would have been written by a native speaker.

  

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It sounds OK to me. What part do you think sounds non-native?

  • It sounds OK to me.
  • What part do you think sounds non-native?
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It sounds OK to me. What part do you think sounds non-native?

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