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Anonymous Posted 14 years ago
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bar make most money on drinks

Is this a correct way to express the sentence? Any changes that need to be made?

Bars make most on drinks. That's where they make the most money. That's what they make most money on.
  

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It is terribly repetitive. Just use the first one.
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Bars make most of their money (on)(from) drinks.
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