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The bar chart shows literacy rate by region and gender 2011 . overall, more than half of the Female and Meal are literate in all region but in Arab state ,south and west Asia and sub_Saharan Africa the figure is less than another region.

About 90% of Female and Male in Central Asia , Central / Eastern Europe , East Asia / pacific and Latin America / Caribbean are literate but in Latin America different between Women and men is a little more than pervious areas . In Arab states , SubSaharan Africa and especially in South and West Asia the different between Women and men has increased . Female in South and West Asia and Sub Saharan Africa are both in same percentage (60%) .

At the end , it’s clear that the literacy rate of Female is less than Meal in different region.

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There are many mistakes in your essay.
First, you wrote less than 150 words, so you lose points for task response.

Second, "Meal" is what people prepare to eat. We eat three meals each day.
Third, do not write any conclusion paragraph in Task 1. Only for Task 2.

Fourth, there are many punctuation, grammatical and word usage errors.

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The bar chart shows literacy rates by region and gender 2011 . (You need to finish the opening paragraph. How many regions are there? Then start a new paragraph because the topic has changed from a description of the chart to the information content.)

overall, (Every sentence begins with a capital letter.) more than half of the Female (wrong form) and Meal (wrong word, wrong form) are literate in all region (wrong form) but in the Arab state (wrong form) ,south and west Asia and sub_Saharan Africa the ~~figure~~ level/value is less than another region. (You wrote one region, which one is it.)

About 90% of Female (wrong form) and Male (wrong form) in Central Asia , Central / Eastern Europe , East Asia / pacific and Latin America / Caribbean are literate but in Latin America different (wrong word) between Women and men is a little more than pervious (wrong word) areas . In the Arab states , SubSaharan (wrong spelling) Africa and especially in South and West Asia the different (wrong word) between Women and men has increased (wrong word. Increase is a change over time, but there is only one time point here. ). Female in South and West Asia and Sub Saharan Africa are both in same percentage (60%) .

At the end , it’s (do not use contractions) clear (Do not write an opinion or conclusion in Task 1) that the literacy rate of Female (wrong form) is less than Meal in different region. (wrong form)

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At the end , it’s clear that the literacy rate of Female is less than Meal in different region.

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