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OttoJ Posted 12 years ago
Grammar

Banking service

Are my sentences correct English?

-If you want to put value on your card to use laundry service, you can do so either by banking service or by going to the college office in person. If you go to the college office in person, the value(s) added to your card is/are in the multiples of ten, eg 10, 20, and 30. If you choose banking service, you can use the machine downstairs at the lobby.

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If you want to put credit on your card to use the laundry service, you can do so either by ATM in the downstairs lobby or at the college office. If you go to the college office, the credit added to your card must be in multiples of ten (10, 20, 30, etc).

— Mister Micawber

  • If you want to put credit on your card to use the laundry service, you can do so either by ATM in the downstairs lobby or at the college office.
  • If you go to the college office, the credit added to your card must be in multiples of ten (10, 20, 30, etc).
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If you want to put credit on your card to use the laundry service, you can do so either by ATM in the downstairs lobby or at the college office. If you go to the college office, the credit added to your card must be in multiples of ten (10, 20, 30, etc).
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Thank you. But if we are talking about Oyster cards or Octopus cards (rather than cards used for college facilities), would the word 'credit' be wrong?
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OttoJOyster cards or Octopus cards
Of course I know nothing about those local cards.
OttoJwould the word 'credit' be wrong?
The word is probably just fine.
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