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Fahd hazmi Posted 18 years ago
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Bad visiting to JarirBookstore

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00Yesterday, I decided that I have to visit Jarirbookstore to take an overview for new books and buy some spacific books. Then, I went to there but , unfortunatly, it was so bad because I have spent a lot of mony that I haven't never spent them in bookstores visiting.02h2

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00 What about the books ? Which one is more expensive? ...02h2

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00In fact, I bought four books ; the fist one is about undurstanding of history by Jasim Sultan. It's good and a little bit worthwhile . The second one is Oxford Dictionary : English - English - Arabic, I bought it because its obviousness. The third book is a buetiful story , which is titled "a little princess" - I think. The most expensive book and the fourth one is "The Secret"..., I spend almost $23 for this book, which is just less than one quarter of my computer screen and less than 200 pages!02h2

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00Actually, its look and font was very attractive, and the price is not printed (stamped) on the cover. Anyway , I relised that I must ask about the price for each book.02h2

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00wisdom ,by me, sais: spend your mony without thinking at three items: books , food, and fantastic smell .02h2

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01font00Thanks for reading , I hope to read your evaluation commonts for my essay. Printing mistakes, using language and how many points ,over ten, can you give?02font02h2

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02br 01i 00I have underlined some problem areas, Fahd:02i 02br 02br 00Yesterday, I decided that I 01u 00have02u 00 to visit 01u 00Jarirbookstore02u 00 to 01u 00take an overview for02u 00 new books and buy some 01u 00spacific02u 00 books. 01u 00Then, I went to there02u 00 but01u 00 , unfortunatly,02u 00 it was01u 00 so bad02u 00 because I 01u 00have spent02u 00 a lot of 01u 00mony02u 00 01u 00that I haven't never spent them02u 00 in bookstores 01u 00visiting02u 00. 01del 00What about the books ?

  • 02br 01i 00I have underlined some problem areas, Fahd:02i 02br 02br 00Yesterday, I decided that I 01u 00have02u 00 to visit 01u 00Jarirbookstore02u 00 to 01u 00take an overview for02u 00 new books and buy some 01u 00spacific02u 00 books.
  • 01u 00Then, I went to there02u 00 but01u 00 , unfortunatly,02u 00 it was01u 00 so bad02u 00 because I 01u 00have spent02u 00 a lot of 01u 00mony02u 00 01u 00that I haven't never spent them02u 00 in bookstores 01u 00visiting02u 00.
  • 01del 00What about the books ?
  • 02del 00 ...
  • In fact, I bought four books01u 00 ; the fist02u 00 one is about 01u 00undurstanding02u 00 01u 00of02u 00 history by Jasim Sultan.
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01i00I have underlined some problem areas, Fahd:02i02br
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00Yesterday, I decided that I 01u00have02u00 to visit 01u00Jarirbookstore02u00 to 01u00take an overview for02u00 new books and buy some 01u00spacific02u00 books. 01u00Then, I went
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01b00 I just at the first step to learn English. So, I hope that you show me the right way. 02b02br
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01b00I'm greatful for helping.02b02br
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00Yesterday, I decided that I visit “Jarir Bookstore” to look for new books and buy some specific books. I went
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01i00Getting better, Fahd. 01b00Rule 102b00: Proofread before you post. You can correct many simple errors yourself if you review your writing carefully.02i02br
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01span00Yesterday, I decided that I01b00 would02b00 visit Jarir Bookstore to look for new books
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00GREAT !02h3

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00 In fact, I'm Arabian student and Arabic langauge affects on my English langauge in some grammars and phrases.02h3

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00Execuse me to be here for long time until I become as good as I can.02h3

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00thank you again.02h3

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