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Fahd hazmi Posted 18 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
Bad visiting to JarirBookstore
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00 Yesterday, I decided that I have to visit Jarirbookstore to take an overview for new books and buy some spacific books. Then, I went to there but , unfortunatly, it was so bad because I have spent a lot of mony that I haven't never spent them in bookstores visiting. 02 h2
01 h200 What about the books ? Which one is more expensive? ... 02 h2
01 h200 In fact, I bought four books ; the fist one is about undurstanding of history by Jasim Sultan. It's good and a little bit worthwhile . The second one is Oxford Dictionary : English - English - Arabic, I bought it because its obviousness. The third book is a buetiful story , which is titled "a little princess" - I think. The most expensive book and the fourth one is "The Secret"..., I spend almost $23 for this book, which is just less than one quarter of my computer screen and less than 200 pages! 02 h2
01 h200 Actually, its look and font was very attractive, and the price is not printed (stamped) on the cover. Anyway , I relised that I must ask about the price for each book. 02 h2
01 h200 wisdom ,by me, sais: spend your mony without thinking at three items: books , food, and fantastic smell . 02 h2
01 h201 font 00 Thanks for reading , I hope to read your evaluation commonts for my essay. Printing mistakes, using language and how many points ,over ten, can you give? 02 font 02 h2
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02 br 01 i 00 I have underlined some problem areas, Fahd: 02 i 02 br 02 br 00 Yesterday, I decided that I 01 u 00 have 02 u 00 to visit 01 u 00 Jarirbookstore 02 u 00 to 01 u 00 take an overview for 02 u 00 new books and buy some 01 u 00 spacific 02 u 00 books. 01 u 00 Then, I went to there 02 u 00 but 01 u 00 , unfortunatly, 02 u 00 it was 01 u 00 so bad 02 u 00 because I 01 u 00 have spent 02 u 00 a lot of 01 u 00 mony 02 u 00 01 u 00 that I haven't never spent them 02 u 00 in bookstores 01 u 00 visiting 02 u 00 . 01 del 00 What about the books ?
- 02 br 01 i 00 I have underlined some problem areas, Fahd: 02 i 02 br 02 br 00 Yesterday, I decided that I 01 u 00 have 02 u 00 to visit 01 u 00 Jarirbookstore 02 u 00 to 01 u 00 take an overview for 02 u 00 new books and buy some 01 u 00 spacific 02 u 00 books.
- 01 u 00 Then, I went to there 02 u 00 but 01 u 00 , unfortunatly, 02 u 00 it was 01 u 00 so bad 02 u 00 because I 01 u 00 have spent 02 u 00 a lot of 01 u 00 mony 02 u 00 01 u 00 that I haven't never spent them 02 u 00 in bookstores 01 u 00 visiting 02 u 00 .
- 01 del 00 What about the books ?
- 02 del 00 ...
- In fact, I bought four books 01 u 00 ; the fist 02 u 00 one is about 01 u 00 undurstanding 02 u 00 01 u 00 of 02 u 00 history by Jasim Sultan.
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01 i 00 I have underlined some problem areas, Fahd: 02 i 02 br
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00 Yesterday, I decided that I 01 u 00 have 02 u 00 to visit 01 u 00 Jarirbookstore 02 u 00 to 01 u 00 take an overview for 02 u 00 new books and buy some 01 u 00 spacific 02 u 00 books. 01 u 00 Then, I went
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00 Yesterday, I decided that I 01 u 00 have 02 u 00 to visit 01 u 00 Jarirbookstore 02 u 00 to 01 u 00 take an overview for 02 u 00 new books and buy some 01 u 00 spacific 02 u 00 books. 01 u 00 Then, I went
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1 b 00 thank you mister 02 b 02 br
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01 b 00 I just at the first step to learn English. So, I hope that you show me the right way. 02 b 02 br
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01 b 00 I'm greatful for helping. 02 b 02 br
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00 Yesterday, I decided that I visit “Jarir Bookstore” to look for new books and buy some specific books. I went
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01 b 00 I just at the first step to learn English. So, I hope that you show me the right way. 02 b 02 br
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01 b 00 I'm greatful for helping. 02 b 02 br
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00 Yesterday, I decided that I visit “Jarir Bookstore” to look for new books and buy some specific books. I went
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01 i 00 Getting better, Fahd. 01 b 00 Rule 1 02 b 00 : Proofread before you post. You can correct many simple errors yourself if you review your writing carefully. 02 i 02 br
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01 span 00 Yesterday, I decided that I 01 b 00 would 02 b 00 visit Jarir Bookstore to look for new books
01 i 00 Getting better, Fahd. 01 b 00 Rule 1 02 b 00 : Proofread before you post. You can correct many simple errors yourself if you review your writing carefully. 02 i 02 br
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01 span 00 Yesterday, I decided that I 01 b 00 would 02 b 00 visit Jarir Bookstore to look for new books
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01 h300 In fact, I'm Arabian student and Arabic langauge affects on my English langauge in some grammars and phrases. 02 h3
01 h300 Execuse me to be here for long time until I become as good as I can. 02 h3
01 h300 thank you again. 02 h3
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