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Quaerereverum Posted 15 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Bad situation teaches us an important lesson.

Hello,

Does my parageraph sound proper?

  • When I was seven years old, my English teacher gave us lots of homework. One day I didn't do my homework, instead I erased her previous crass out marks from my notebook to show I did my homework. I told my classmate to do so, since he didn't write his homework as well. As the teacher saw his notebook, she realized he was cheated. When she asked him why he did, he told her that I taught him. The result was that she hit my hands with a ruler so badly that they were numbs. From that bad experience I learned that not all people are trustworthy.

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When I was seven years old, my English teacher gave us lots of homework. One day I didn't do my homework, but instead I erased her previous cross-out marks from my notebook to show I had done my homework. I told my classmate to do so also , since he hadn't done his homework either .

— Mister Micawber

  • When I was seven years old, my English teacher gave us lots of homework.
  • One day I didn't do my homework, but instead I erased her previous cross-out marks from my notebook to show I had done my homework.
  • I told my classmate to do so also , since he hadn't done his homework either .
  • When the teacher saw his notebook, she realized he had cheated.
  • When she asked him why he did so , he told her that I had taught him.
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When I was seven years old, my English teacher gave us lots of homework. One day I didn't do my homework, but instead I erased her previous cross-out marks from my notebook to show I had done my homework. I told my classmate to do so also, since he hadn't done his homework either. When the teacher saw his notebook, she realized he had cheated
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