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Vasuarm Posted 17 years ago
Grammar
Back In Time
Hi!
Please correct the following sentencs. Thank you.
Back in time, when young was the moon
Speechless we stood in a desolate train station.
Holding hands, we’d wept for our failed love.
Pale went your face as you fought tears,
feigning a smut in your eyes.
Please correct the following sentencs. Thank you.
Back in time, when young was the moon
Speechless we stood in a desolate train station.
Holding hands, we’d wept for our failed love.
Pale went your face as you fought tears,
feigning a smut in your eyes.
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vasuarm Back in time, when young was the moon Speechless we stood in a desolate train station. Holding hands, we’d wept for our failed love. Pale went your face as you fought tears, feigning a *** in your eyes.
- vasuarm Back in time, when young was the moon Speechless we stood in a desolate train station.
- Holding hands, we’d wept for our failed love.
- Pale went your face as you fought tears, feigning a *** in your eyes.
- I don't see anything wrong.
- I have trouble with "Pale went your face," but I don't have a fix.
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vasuarmBack in time, when young was the moon
Speechless we stood in a desolate train station.
Holding hands, we’d wept for our failed love.
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