Bachelor's thesis

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hey, could anyone read my summary. It should be written in academic style.

This is the first part:

The present bachelor's thesis is to comprehend the phenomenon generally examined as a learning difficulties in reading and writing by children with a intellectual disability with mild handicaps. The aim of undertaken research was to determin the level of difficulty in reading and writing by subjects.

Clive · Accepted Answer

Hi,

hey, could anyone read my summary. It should be written in academic style. Dare I suggest that 'academic sty;e' is not famous for being good English?

This is the first part:

The present bachelor’s thesis is to comprehend the phenomenon generally examined as a learning difficulties in reading and writing by children with a intellectual disability with mild handicaps. The aim of undertaken research was to determin the level of difficulty in reading and writing by subjects.

I suggest this, although I'm not sure of the exact meaning you intend.

This bachelor’s thesis examines learning difficulties in reading and writing by children with mild intellectual disability. The purpose of the research was to determine the level of difficulty in reading and writing by a range of subjects.

You don't want to advance and defend a proposition or conclusion, based on the results of your research?

Clive

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